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Stilleto's secret 09/09/2008 Framed into perfection indeed, my secret lover, and I. Unmindful of a trap blindly adored by hungry eyes. A mocking illusion to capture foolish glances unwittingly thrown. And, the constant echoes of freedom whispering secretly. Envied, above and beyond the comfort of lucid dreams. I heard, my secret lover calling after my soul. I, and my Secret lover own moments born from glorious feasts adorned with symphony’s breath. discreetly pursued by obsession. Yet still, I never learn how to dance with My secret lover. Copyright: Leofina Jane G. Galleta All Rights Reserved. ©2008leofinajanegalleta Also posted @: www.poetrycastle.org www.drippingmind.wordpress.com www. midnightwanderersociety.blogspot.com

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Leofina Jane Galleta	9/9/2008 9:48:15 PM	Yey, agyamanak kakabsat kadagiti kommento,:-). Jonathan, thank you kabsat. I appreciate ti kanayon a panangbisbisitam kadagiti poste ken blogsko. M. Javonillo, agyamanak iti komento, Sir:-). Pacensia kadi ta saanko masapulan ti lapisko nga ilokano. Nabayag bassiten a pinanawan nak ti musa ti berso-iluko. Bareng agsublinto. Anusanyo kadi paylaeng ti natda nga inspirasyon a pagpulpuligosan ti namumo a "poetic expression" ko, :-). Manong Jric, thank you, hehe!	0
Johnnyric Domingo	9/9/2008 8:39:26 PM	AHAMMM! pintasen LJ! diak kayat ag-comment wen. Baka ket agtintinnallikudkayo no maipatayab dagiti sonata a nasken koma a sappuyoten nga i-sala?	5
Marlo Ragandap Javonillo	9/9/2008 7:14:55 PM	GOOD BUT WE NEED ilokano version!	1
Jonathan Alvarado Jones	9/9/2008 10:41:06 AM	I read this in your drippingmind blog. I can only agree with the comments of your readers. This poem does convey a powerful sensuality and a touch of genuine feeling. This poem is very sensual in its innocence, and the writing technique is superb.	5