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Gentle prints 10/19/2008 Your fingertips- though numb and tired I’ve felt, slowly tracing each long, forgotten steps, the remains of bygone gentle prints. You traded one breath for a kiss, like a gift- stolen from dusty shelves where lonely shadows reign. And these shadows- you’ve always wished to breathe with fire though nothing, but silhouettes exist- a piece of you, but not a reality. Yet, smiles won’t cease to light the fire inside the empty chambers left open- as the shadow’s heartbeats escaped to fade as silence finally reigns. Copyright by: Leofina Jane G.Galleta All Rights Reserved.©2008leofinajanegalleta also posted at: http://drippingmind.wordpress.com [Drippingmind Writings Online] http://poetrycastle.org [Poetrycastle - Online Community of Poets]

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Leofina Jane Galleta	10/23/2008 9:43:59 PM	Hopsla! Ading Sherwin, diak sa met mapataran dagitoy aglaplapusanan a nakunamon, adingko,:-). Numanpay kasta ket agyamanak iti dakdakkel ngem siak kadagiti imalditmo a balikas. Parengski Marvin, dayta kano cable car ken inton next century pay, her her her!! Parengski Dan, nakatimtim ngata ti naiyatang a danum ni Parengski, panagkunak met laeng daytoy ketdi a,hehe. Tenk yu iti komento parengski Danski, aglalabbet ti pakakomikoman ita ket nagpaigid tay lapisko manen, hania met,:-). Ala, agyamyamanak a kanayon kadakayo amin iti panangpalpalabasyo latta kadagiti namuno a maidasdasarko sagpaminsan,:-).	0
Dan Miguel Corpuz	10/20/2008 7:52:54 AM	Lj, napintas! yulogmo iti iluko ket adadda manen nga adu ti mangdaydayaw. Apay inipitmo tay pidit-pidit ni pagayam Marvin? Timmured gamin nga agibbet sarita a para ayat.	5
Marvin Acosta	10/20/2008 12:36:19 AM	marengski, tallo laeng arungaingko ken ayat a sinukatanda iti cable car a mangallatiw bantay gusing-baguio city a pangiliwak tay bituen ti tanap ken ilukodotcom. sherwin pugtuam man toy kunakunak; tangdananka ti kalding, uray ni tyke, jr., a nayon pagbiag, [no kayatmo a.]	0
Sherwin Alegre	10/19/2008 7:04:30 AM	Manang LJ ipadigom man ala dayta im-imetam a talugadingmo. Piman ta bagimi lattan ti umap-apal kadagitoy nagmayat ti limbangna a binatogmo. No ti bilang koma ti panangtan-aw kadagitoy a dandaniwmo manang ket makapabaknang, ay Apo ta siak koman ti kabaknangan itan.	5